Overall good use of facts and stats. To improve find out some more info on how streaming is impacting the music industry - you do touch on this but your point is far too vaugue.
You need to add more key terminology to your discussion e.g google as a media conglomerate / tecnological convergence facialited streaming...etc. Use your media on in the online age glossary to help you with this.
Overall good use of facts and stats.
ReplyDeleteTo improve find out some more info on how streaming is impacting the music industry - you do touch on this but your point is far too vaugue.
You need to add more key terminology to your discussion e.g google as a media conglomerate / tecnological convergence facialited streaming...etc. Use your media on in the online age glossary to help you with this.